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    :iconpeachlover42:
    That last chapter pretty much sealed Kiki's fate, but what if, hypotheticaly speaking, Kiki wasn't dead yet... I'm just contemplating weather or not Kiki should actually die in this chapter or wait till later so that people will feel a little more sorrow at Lynk's loss.

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    Well, You Are What You Eat.
    :iconsamusemblem:
    Or, what if... Kiki wasn't actually a monkey, just a monkey creature because of the realm Lynk is in... Just stuff to think about... You don't have to run your ideas by me first, its your story! :D I must say I am disappointed though that, you still haven't incorported Lynk's feminity into the story, or the fact that she is part bunny... that HAS to have some kind of effect on her character... somehow! Imagine, your a guy... then poof... your a girl with bunny ears... Things would have to be different for you! :) Maybe, she is slowly becomming more feminie the longer she stays in the realm... or maybe the bunnyness is slowly taking over her body the longer she is in the realm... or maybe she is slowly losing her male mind and losing knowledge of who she is the longer she is in the realm... Just stuff to think about that can add suspense and action... Good luck! :D
    and remember, if you don't like what direction I do... then don't follow what I say! It's your story, not mine :D
    :iconpeachlover42:
    Hey Samus. What's up? Listen I've been contemplating soemthing. If I haven't received any comments for story chapters or journal entries in a while, should I assume that I'm doing something wrong?

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    Well, You Are What You Eat.
    :iconsamusemblem:
    No, no... sorry... I've just been busy as heck... I've got a friend's weeding that I'm in and other stuff. Amid trying to finish my own stuff, my job, my other activities... I just ran out of time this week! sorry dude, I'll get back to it!
    :iconpeachlover42:
    That's okay, I'm fairly busy myself.

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    Well, You Are What You Eat.
    :iconsamusemblem:
    Dude, I'm gonna try and get around to reading some on Sunday. Have you given any more thought to any original ideas? What's the future of the Zelda story? I think I've read a few chapers from chapet 13 and on of the DOA cyber shifter but I'll have to re-read them to be sure... From what I remember though, some of what I thought was the same thing as what I thought about the Link story... I haven't read your stuff since though... sorry... so busy...
    Gotta finish my story over the weekend too, I can't leave my fans waiting for too long! lol
    :iconpeachlover42:
    What do you mean the same thing as Zelda? If you mean bringing the rain thing, then I don't know how much more I can do to John. He's been imprisoned, transformed, lose his memory and has his worst enemy living in his head. The Zelda thing will take a little time. And if your talking about the DOA lost chapters, then I agree 110% that they are too, much of the same story, all over again.

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    Well, You Are What You Eat.

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